tag:blogger.com,1999:blog-8548314039014214875.post2782888627600000281..comments2023-05-10T23:03:13.004-10:00Comments on Ralene Burke - Faith Without Limits: A Beginning that Wows!Ralenehttp://www.blogger.com/profile/07890775905785233298noreply@blogger.comBlogger3125tag:blogger.com,1999:blog-8548314039014214875.post-78348414765652559742009-07-15T15:30:43.822-10:002009-07-15T15:30:43.822-10:00Thanks Cindy and Peg. I'm glad you enjoyed the...Thanks Cindy and Peg. I'm glad you enjoyed the post (I enjoyed writing it!). Cindy, I'm right there with you. It is a learning process and I think that my first chapter in Dividing Spirits is SO much better than my last attempt at a novel.Ralenehttps://www.blogger.com/profile/07890775905785233298noreply@blogger.comtag:blogger.com,1999:blog-8548314039014214875.post-90893455204396997382009-07-15T13:35:58.212-10:002009-07-15T13:35:58.212-10:00Very well done, YOUNGSTER. {grin} I was kinda look...Very well done, YOUNGSTER. {grin} I was kinda looking for the GMC, but still . . . cool.<br /><br />After reading Chris Roerden's DON'T MURDER YOUR MYSTERY and Maass's newest, THE FIRE IN FICTION, I will definitely be making my fantabulous prologue into a scene in the first chapter.<br /><br />When I get to my rewrites. Which will be soon.<br /><br />Soon, I tell you! Soon!Peg Brantleyhttps://www.blogger.com/profile/04906858123466177508noreply@blogger.comtag:blogger.com,1999:blog-8548314039014214875.post-2875019257936514662009-07-15T10:57:20.228-10:002009-07-15T10:57:20.228-10:00Wow, I LOVE this post! What a great way to explain...Wow, I LOVE this post! What a great way to explain what a first chapter needs. In the past--okay, still :D--I struggle with first chapters. I include the main character, show the conflict, but I struggle with making the reader want to know more. I'm working on it but still learning. Have a great day!Cindy R. Wilsonhttps://www.blogger.com/profile/13488732331021750408noreply@blogger.com